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Bloody retribution waits at the threshold to my dark lonely home
Wheezing and hissing
I can hear the gargling of blood
Three voices are calling
I donít want to listen
Though I have no choice

Is it not enough that her memory haunts my every dream?
No!, they scream

I need to escape them
My wrists are begging to be cut
Or is it they trying to trick me?

My ears are bleeding
Their high pitched screams cut into them like one-thousand rusty needles
But I wonít let them finish
I will cut them off myself

I feel their jagged razor claws painfully caressing my scalp
Running through my filthy hair
Now encrusted in congealed blood
So Iíll pull it all out

I canít close my eyes anymore
For that is when I see three hideous faces with serpentine locks
Crimson painted eyes staring into my soul
These visions have to end
So my eyes open I will sew

I taste their rancid metallic breath
It is overwhelming like a thick ocean fog
Consuming the flesh of my tongue
So Iíll stop the spreading cancer
Iíll cut it out

The hurt Iíve caused to womankind cannot be undone
They want to brand my genitals for the sins theyíre guilty of
But I will not let them
I will cut them off

A butcher knife will do for the task at hand
A bathtub to lie in
For I can no longer standÖ.

The screams are louder
They are ready to attack
I wonít give them a chance
I will cut them off


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