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Try to understand why I am leaving
So my actions donít seem so deceiving
The love we shared has departed
Like the waters at sweet evení tide

My time to me has been wasted
The colors of life I have tasted
Washed away by the bitter salty sea
Like white sand on a hidden beach

Overcome in a whirlpool of pleasure
Dug up like a long hidden treasure
Engulfed in your love I once was
Drowning never seemed so fun


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