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Lately I look in the mirror and see something else
My face is distorted , twisted and blurry
Chewed up by god and vomited onto earth
Stepped on by everyone
Ignored by the rest
Hatred and lust thrown into a cranial blender
Thoughts once pure have been soiled by life's absurdity
Friends never existed, figments in the naive mind of a lost soul


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