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It’s an unflattering pose -
on my knees, hands clasped
feigning piety,
as she sleeps, naked,
the small of her back
still wearing
a slick coat of sweat,
while I whisper words that
just might be
meaningless,
into a slim navy pillow stained
with
conspicuous white blotches
of my own
making.

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"Imperious, choleric, irascible, extreme in everything, with a dissolute imagination the like of which has never been seen... there you have me in a nutshell, and kill me again or take me as I am, for I shall not change."

From his Last Will & Testament, Marquis de Sade


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The following comments are for "Apostasy"
by strangedaze

Strangedaze's Stand on "knees"
Thought provoking...Interesting images and inference.

B

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: January 30, 2005 )

strangedaze
Nice work. It gives great images. Unflattering,meaningless,conspicuous, adds to the mix in a simple collage of "why am I in this place but for sex?"

charlie

( Posted by: williamhill [Member] On: January 30, 2005 )





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