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I remember the night I met you,
my impossible dream came true,
I tried to hide my feelings inside,
Its almost impossible for me to describe.

As time went on our affections grew,
I realized, the one I wanted was you,
we made the decision to be a “couple”,
I never would have imagined, my heart would grow double.

I remember the song we danced to,
when I first heard the words, “I love you”,
It hit me like a wall of bricks,
I actually went outside and got sick.

You see, love is not what I was searching for,
I was afraid of what would be beyond that door,
Could I do all the things that would make you happy?
Would you feel like I was a little too sappy?

I swallowed my fear and took that dive,
I had no way of knowing I would soon be your wife,
Things have happened that I cannot explain,
fights and words, was it all in vain?

Every marriage has its ups and downs,
A lot of smiles and a lot of frowns,
But I have to say, we’ve always worked through them,
sometimes better than I could have possibly imagined.

There’s a little irony, a lesson to be learned,
a lifetime of love is not owed but earned,
hold onto the good, keep the bad in sight,
because in the end, your intuition was right!

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The following comments are for "Loves Intuition ©"
by gldylcks

On Love ... and life
I like your style (it's a lot like mine)
And if we keep writing we'll both be fine
Life's a tough old teacher
And man's a hard headed creature
Life first gives us all the test
THEN comes the lesson and all the rest

Thanks for posting/sharing your work

( Posted by: Gramma [Member] On: January 30, 2005 )

The Love Shaft
It's one thing to weigh
Love's ups and downs...
and another to regret it

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: May 7, 2016 )

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