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"May hell rain down it's fury upon the earth" I said. It rushed in that day when the madness hit me. When I finally snapped it was more like trees being crushed at their base than pencils at recess. A great emptiness sucking in everything in its path.

With rage filling my heart I screamed to the sky. "With God as my witness...what was once mine, must be returned to me!!! Or Surely all that is good and pure will die!!!!"

If this is God than I shall have none of it. If this is the world we live in than I shall find another!

This wrong must be rectified, this injustice MUST be cured. With every muscle in my body flexing and tendons ripping I unleashed my primal scream


And to that my wife's only reply was "Jesus honey calm down, it's only your car keys...they'll turn up."

It wasn't my fault...I fell asleep and missed my stop.


The following comments are for "Hell's Fury Raining Down"
by Jeff

Funny stuff Jeff. And Sweet Jesus, it's a topic that everyone can relate to. Though, I find if I keep my keys in the same place I never loose them.


( Posted by: Richard Dani [Member] On: May 31, 2002 )

Thanks Rogan
I checked out the post at scream. Good reading...thanks for the spot. I'm sad to admit, it's my first time checking out your website, but I think I'll return to see more.

Thanks to everyone for the good words.


( Posted by: Jeff [Member] On: May 31, 2002 )

Great Scream
Great job turning this thing into a vocal. Your deep voice added a lot to it. Took forever with my slow ass phone connection but it was still worth it. Can't wait to hear "Raw Blink." That's on tomorrow's to do list.


( Posted by: Richard Dani [Member] On: May 31, 2002 )

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