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disguise your face and turn away,
make room for the believer,
the runner of himself-
shades of deeds,
return of mind,
no one can deceive much longer-
your smile fades, it payes,
for a consecutive tear-
after the show, you turn away-
he says you to be yourself.


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by nadai

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