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How could four letters bring me to my knees
My heart begging to hear them flow from your lips
To fill up my thirst for untamed bliss
Like the cool running waters of a long hidden stream

Tears fall from my eyes at the sight of them
Happiness and sadness unwillingly exposed
Long covered by the curtain of uncertainty and doubt
Drawn back by the promise of something more

From the ashes of my heart arise a phoenix of hope
That the words this time will be meaningfully spoke
That the words sweet taste will not sour my soul
That I will never hear them and then be left alone


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