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I\'m bad at titles...
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skateboards, skinned knees
bandaids, ice please
sling-shots, chipped teeth
toy swords, plastic sheaths
baseball bats, black eyes
daredevil antics, climbing high
summer camp, broken bones
itchy cast, long ride home
kool-aid, bug bites
shorter days, colder nights
summer ends, school begins
180 days, do it again

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And another thing is, no matter how much you think you love someone, you'll step back when a pool of their blood edges too close.


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The following comments are for "Time Out"
by direb0y

re: caught
Actually, this started off with the title of your summer challenge post(which I haven't started yet _

( Posted by: direb0y [Member] On: June 1, 2002 )

let's try again...
Actually, this started off with the title of your summer challenge thing (which I haven't started yet _

( Posted by: direb0y [Member] On: June 1, 2002 )

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*throws something*

( Posted by: direb0y [Member] On: June 1, 2002 )





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