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Tempting the temptress
Defying the beast
Bold beauty
That holds no peace

Forever avenging
Forever purging
Forever crying
Forever fearless

Warrior on the edge
Mistress betrayed
Lover denied
True love…forgotten

Blue are her tears
Green is her anger
She is the most feared danger
Cold and salty
Freeing the forgotten
Frantically calling
Sending the world
Swaying and rocking


(4-15-04)


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Though nothing can bring back the hour
Of splendour in the grass,
of glory in the flower;
We will grieve not, rather find
Strength in what remains behind

(William Wordsworth)




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