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I saw him today in my mind

The thought made me freeze

I feel the cold climbing up my spine

From my arms to my fingertips

I start to sweat and lose control

I can’t turn, turn and run

I start to think and wished I hadn’t

Because I realized this isn’t in my head

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The following comments are for "Cold"
by poetfreak

Good stuff here

You did some nice work here. I really like this line:

"I feel the cold climbing up my spine
From my arms to my fingertips"

Nice Work - keep writing.


( Posted by: feliciastone [Member] On: January 29, 2005 )

Thanks for the imput.


( Posted by: poetfreak [Member] On: March 30, 2005 )

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