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My life seems to bump me around. most times I don't rightside up from upside down.ever since you left me, i've been around. I've been up i've been down i've been lost and i've been found. i've been turned around and i've gained ground. ever since you left me i've been around. I've bounced around up and down, border to border, and town to town, my life seems like a merry-go-round. ever since you left, me i've been around. i've been up i've been down i've been lost and i've been found i've been turned around and i've gained ground. ever since you left me, i've been around.

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gabe l. ... also an american cowboy.


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by vintagegibson

around
hey man, i like this one alot. its got a nice flow to it. some good word uses and what not. good to see some more from you bro. keep working.

jimmy g.

( Posted by: TOD [Member] On: January 27, 2005 )

thanx
good to hear that a pro like you likes my humble work.

( Posted by: vintagegibson [Member] On: January 28, 2005 )





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