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this blizzard foretold











































now embanked beneath these clouds
































my youthful wonder






























------
The body is a season,
the mind, a timepiece
and the spirit, a cloud passing.


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The following comments are for "Snowstorm Haiku"
by SaintEnvious

Zero visibility....
Smiled as soon as I started scrolling down...Excellent.


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( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: January 26, 2005 )

Neat
That was cool, I liked that, took me a minute too I just sat there waiting for it to finish loading!
Angelface

( Posted by: angelface [Member] On: January 26, 2005 )

the scrolling down
made me imagine the snow falling. this is a good one.

( Posted by: johnjohndoe [Member] On: January 27, 2005 )

PenBoAngJoh
Still snowbound. My
thanks goes out to all of you
in the great beyond.
________________
the childrens fort raised
among chairs and blankets draped,
their innocence safe

S

( Posted by: SaintEnvious [Member] On: January 27, 2005 )





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