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How would you feel,
To be engulfed in darkness?
To be alone at night?
How would you feel,
To have no one care?
To have the world turn its back on you
Only to look when youíve fallen?
How would you feel,
To be utterly ignored?
To scream but not be heard?
How would you feel,
Having no one to hold?
And no one to hold you?
How would you feel,
To have loneness eat at you?
To wish you hadnít awakened?
How would you feel,
To know youíre right?
To have no one understand?
How would you feel,
During those icky cold nights?
During those painfully hard days?
How would you feel?

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