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Smart little haiku
Syllables counted by hand
You have to use two

Alex, The boy full of ideas

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The following comments are for "Knowledge"
by amusedlilboy

Honestly, you are my "Good Mornin' Haikui. You to me, me to you. Also, I think this has been one of the most besar last 30-45min. Since, I read your great haiku, I haven't smiled not one
single little moment of sure pleasure, since 6:14pm, last night. I didn't accomplish
nothing but, breathe,sitting in front of my smart box,
sittin around being,I've been up for 2 solid days, beats 10. At 20ty that was fun, at 40ty, that was 'bout done. 7 days, no sleep, delierium and exhaustion, scared me. I made it, though
Like said I've sat here most of the13 hours.
Excuse me sir,for drifting. Yours , the haiku,
made me smile and think, this has to be, if
not the most unconcious physically involved
form of writing, I don't notice I do it. I count every,letter i think sometimes and still miscount
This was most light and very good. ~Robin~
p.s. 8:30 am. Sweet dreams.

( Posted by: Robinbird [Member] On: January 25, 2005 )

amusedlilboy's "Knowledge"..
A little knowledge is a dangerous thing...Amusing too...B

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: January 25, 2005 )

a few toes...very good ...Kacee

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: January 25, 2005 )

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