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THE SAND BOX...... Many times in life cruel curves are tossed at us and we must find a way of thinking that will best serve ourselves, so my way of thinking is this, there are many sandboxes out there in the world, and many men and women will go play in the wrong sandbox but if you think of it this way you will be better able to keep yourself happy and keep your love alive, let it stand tests along the way, remember what brought you both together in the very first place. The wind and the water rush up on the beach, and tear down sand castles, but the wonderful thing about the sand is that it dries out again and can be rebuilt just the way that you want it to be , so sweep your sand box, by being the wind and the water, make it better, make it smooth, and the way to accomplish that is to talk things over, seek the answers that you must, but then forgive, in forgiving you must not keep bringing up the mistake, you must set yourself free by realizing that it might have been a mistake that your other half didn't really mean to make, mistakes happen, don't let it destroy your sand castle, even if the wind blows it down be the sun that builds it back again, sweep the mistake out to sea, by crying if you must but then let your heart be the light that shines brightest and stronger than another can and make your sand box be where the footprints embedded there will stand the wind and the rain......... written by Juliette Valeri



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Just Me Julie



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by justmejulie

good
I liked how you put that essay, its short and smart just how I like them to be! Keep a-writing!!!

( Posted by: angelface [Member] On: January 25, 2005 )





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