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She canít sing
As you will soon find out
If you ever catch her in an odd mood
One of those times when she actually
feels comfortable enough with herself
To not care what anyone else thinks
As she sings and maybe even dances
The point being
She doesnít write music either
Being that she seems to be musically challenged
But she does write for him
So that he can know
What she sometimes canít say out loud
For whatever reason
She is unable to express herself all the time
Good thing heís willing to wait
For one of those days
When sheís feeling odd

"I like to think that the whole world is my friend"

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