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Sky's Claire blue and I'm gonna rain

This old place will never be the same

Boots two-steppin' all over my heart

I never dreamed my cowgirl angel would part

Longnecks

longhorns

long legs clad in tight jeans

She's a cowboy's dream...


C'mon, cowpokes! Help me out here.

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"A foolish consistency is the hobgoblin of little minds, adored by little statesman and philosophers and divines. With consistency a great soul has simply nothing to do."

- Ralph 'Where's Waldo' Emerson




"I don't know half of you half as well as I should like. And I like less than half of you half as well as you deserve."
- Bilbo Baggins













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The following comments are for "Claire Blue Sky"
by drsoos

Claire in the sky w/diamonds..
Don't "rain" Soos...Best way to show someone how much you care is by setting them free..letting them go..Sounds like she'll always have a reserved corner of your heart to return to...


Doctor B.

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: January 24, 2005 )

B7L Sunset serenade

A country tune just felt like a proper adios, but as I have never written one, I hoped some of you other word-herders out there might pitch in a verse or so...

...now would be a good time.



s




( Posted by: drsoos [Member] On: January 24, 2005 )

soos: my line...
Well, I'm not much for the "too pretty to be true" songs, but I admire your effort here. Claire must have left a wide swath in Lit's "heart"-lands..Keep croonin' Doc.

B

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: January 24, 2005 )

niiice
this was so amazingly well written...I loved it from the title...such a sweet farewell.

( Posted by: snuffystuff [Member] On: March 21, 2005 )

"Claire Blue Sky"
drsoos- You are a cool dog.


B

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: November 7, 2005 )

DrSoos
LOvely, Claire would have loved this also, knowing she loves music she'd love the musicality of this short poem. The first line is all beautiful, glorious and sad.

( Posted by: peterpaulino [Member] On: November 8, 2005 )





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