Lit.Org - a community for readers and writers Advanced Search
 




Average Rating
10

(1 votes)


RatingRated by
10Unknown

You must login to vote

[Author Note] Below is my poem "Simon Darque", which is an intro of sorts to a character in a new pulp serial I'm working on. Think of pulp hero's like The Spider and The Shadow. [/Author Note]

I am Simon
I am the Dark
I am the fear in your mind
I am the cold and the stark.

I am the wicked
I am the despised
I am the fear
I am the terror behind your eyes.

I am Simon
I am the Dark
I am the feeling, piercing your heart
I am the anger and the spark.

I am the fallen
I am the burning coal
I am the nightmare
I am the monster, come for your soul.

I am Simon.
I am the Dark.

I am - Simon Darque.

------
Chrispian H. Burks
Lit.Org Owner / Founder
Blog - Twitter - Facebook



Related Items

Comments

The following comments are for "Simon Darque"
by Chrispian

mmmmm
i LOVE this...

what an intro.

i await in not so humble anticipation... patience? lol not a chance :P gimme!

Ju =*_*=

( Posted by: De`esse [Member] On: May 28, 2002 )

re: Simon Darque
If you were creating a cartoon, this would make a great intro. song. Slap a little bass beat behind it and bam, you're done.

Good poem and I look forward to your character. Oh by the way, I thought the fourth verse was excellent.

Richard

( Posted by: Richard Dani [Member] On: May 28, 2002 )

howdy!
quite nice, i must agree :oP i think i'm going to read your serial whenever it's up (i need to read more of the stories around here). anywho, rock on!

~v

( Posted by: Veruca Salt [Member] On: May 28, 2002 )

cool cool
I like it. I think the note at the beginning helps a lot. It gives you a context for the poem. I thought the ending was supercool.

( Posted by: Seanspacey [Member] On: May 29, 2002 )





Add Your Comment

You Must be a member to post comments and ratings. If you are NOT already a member, signup now it only takes a few seconds!

All Fields are required

Commenting Guidelines:
  • All comments must be about the writing. Non-related comments will be deleted.
  • Flaming, derogatory or messages attacking other members well be deleted.
  • Adult/Sexual comments or messages will be deleted.
  • All subjects MUST be PG. No cursing in subjects.
  • All comments must follow the sites posting guidelines.
The purpose of commenting on Lit.Org is to help writers improve their writing. Please post constructive feedback to help the author improve their work.


Username:
Password:
Subject:
Comment:





Login:
Password: