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Is my love for you an uninvited desire
Or simply a reflection, reminding you of me...

You've heard my lonely dreams in desperate poetic whispers
While your silence screams to me, my screams of love cannot be silenced

Forgive this love soldiers war-weary heart, his sole target is
Survival of that extraordinary love held within your gentle grasp

On loves battlefield the abandoned buildings and rubble strewn streets
Are mere aftermath of lonely nights waiting, waiting your love be awakened

Wing your way to her essence and share again my unfettered love
Awaken her love, gentle winds, untether her heart for me

My eternal love, burning like the Suns relentless scorching of desert sands
Thunders too, through the pastures and fields, like cannons in a fierce battle

The sky aglow at sunset, floods my soul, like flairs in the night
Searching for signs of your love, be shared with me

Hopes and prayers never ending, time and life changes nothing
Time only stares and life is befuddled by this eternal love for you

My heart, even if rent as a tree by lightning and
One day covered with dirt, still, my love will yearn for yours

~~~

With apologies to CAR for using this title.

------
Daniel Lloyd Kennedy


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The following comments are for "DIRT"
by daprdan

daprdan
This plays like a Civil War love poem, almost Rhett Butlerish. This womon is loved without a doubt. Hope it is real life,Dan.

charlie.

( Posted by: williamhill [Member] On: January 21, 2005 )

Many Thanks...
Lucy... I returned with this to vent...

Thank you too charlie... something drug me back in time... yes I too think it was from another time... :)

( Posted by: daprdan [Member] On: January 24, 2005 )





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