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The sun shines across my eyes
Banishing the night
The moment that we held dies
now I take my flight
And for a second, I was pure
And you were there, so lost
my broken soul had a cure
The hell with any cost
But I take my leave now
And you still sleep on
my lips leave you no vow
I watch the day creep on
I hope that youíll forget my face
And our parting causes no pain
I try not to leave a trace
And walk out a strangerís door again



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The following comments are for "I Have To Go Now"
by nimue_the_mighty

I miss Nimue!
First of all, I miss talking to you... send me an email... and secondly, I really liked this poem a lot.

( Posted by: love_n_sprockets [Member] On: June 16, 2005 )





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