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She is growley and rough
But the way she loves us is amazing
She is always there and she cares for us
She will never let us want for anything
She protects us from harm
Yet still lets us learn and grow in our own way
She tells us the truth when we ask for it
She loves and is there for us into infinity
Even though she has done some bad things in the past
Her soul remains angelic and innocent
For she loves her children with her whole heart
Unconditionally
Even though we may not all be of her blood
We respect her and care for her
Because she teaches us by example
And for the rest of my life
I will aspire and strive
To be even half the wonderful person, parent, friend
That Ga Is



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The following comments are for "The Way Ga Teaches Us"
by Gami

Very Sweet
Gami ~ this is a very sweet poem. I wonder, who is Ga?

( Posted by: hazelfaern [Member] On: January 23, 2005 )

re
*laughs evilly* I'm not telling...

( Posted by: Gami [Member] On: January 24, 2005 )





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