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And does it ever
Stop snowing here?
Like, wow…what the hell
Do people do here?
Where are the malls?
Umm, hello, why are there
So many damn hills?
And the local tooth fairy…
She must be broke.
These cars,
Like, oh my God,
They’re, like, total swiss cheese.
I don’t know whose idea
It was to have snow in
April, but like, duh,
What a moron.
How come everything
Is so green?
And why is the
Tallest building
Only three stories high?
Can I get some
Half decent Chinese food, please?!
Why the hell don’t
They answer the phone
At the pizza joint
Past ten?
What is Ames?
You’re kidding right?
They only sell
Cherokee jeans?
Why am I here?
And does it ever
Stop snowing here?

to that cool mountain air on an appalachian trail, oooooh life is better there - yonder mountain string band

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