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My moon glides
Effortlessly across
The midnight blue sky
Shimmering off the lake
It catches my eye
Sometimes making
Me wonder why
And if everyone can see
My moon in their sky.
Much more than just
A source of light
Although it shines
A dull fantastic bright
It effects not only
My keen eye sight
But always there rescuing
Me in my plight.


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to that cool mountain air on an appalachian trail, oooooh life is better there - yonder mountain string band


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The following comments are for "angel"
by dmbrrphish7

Angel Yeh!....
This reads like one of those "I been there" , why
it's so beleivable, I don't knock nobody's art,
Most of mine-experience. I like it, all of it.
The moon is such an incredible force you did well....Robin

( Posted by: Robinbird [Member] On: January 20, 2005 )





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