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He walks into his house
Doesn’t even feel like home
Its so quiet and empty
So quiet and empty

It happened years ago
But it won’t go away
He feels so haunted
He feels so haunted

She’s been gone
And now she’s gone
And she doesn’t care
And she doesn’t care

And he was always such a good man
He was always such a good man
He smiles as he says
“There is nothing here for me anymore
Maybe I’ll just leave
And never return

He is loneliness
He is loneliness
And it happened years ago


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jimmy g--do you see my heart? it is lying on the floor.


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The following comments are for "My Perception"
by JimmyAndHisRocket

greatly sad
this is really sad and really good!

"And he was always such a good man
He was always such a good man
He smiles as he says
“There is nothing here for me anymore
Maybe I’ll just leave
And never return"

It hits my heart, kinda makes me tear up.

( Posted by: supergranny [Member] On: January 21, 2005 )





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