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"Your Song"

I drew a picture of myself in the clouds
I was playing guitar for you
But where else would you expect me to be with you
I'm in the clouds with you
In the clouds with you

And you are so beautiful
You are so beautiful
But I guess that's only natural from an angel

I saw a picture in my head
I was with you, we were holding hands
I never want to see the smile off of your face
You are definitely the way
Definitely my way

And you are so beautiful
You are so beautiful
But I guess that's only natural from an angel

Sweet love
Oh Sweet love
My romance

And I am the luckiest man alive
Anything said couldn't make that a lie
I said I'm the luckiest man alive
Everything said couldn't make that a lie
She is so beautiful
She is so, so beautiful
You are so beautiful
You are so beautiful
But I guess that's only natural coming from an angel


p.s.: thankyou vmn

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jimmy g--do you see my heart? it is lying on the floor.


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The following comments are for "Your Song"
by JimmyAndHisRocket

jrocket's "angel"...
I like "in the clouds" with your "angel"..feels like a song for sure..Write on...


BobbyG

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: January 18, 2005 )

angel
i like it j, " in the clouds with you" its simple but has punch. write on man.

( Posted by: vintagegibson [Member] On: January 18, 2005 )

thanks.
boby7l: thanks for your comment. i haven't posted for about forever and it seems you've become quite popular in while i've been gone so its an honor.
vintagegibson: haha man! welcome to lit! thanks for the comment and definitely looking forward to your first post!

jimmy g

( Posted by: JimmyAndHisRocket [Member] On: January 18, 2005 )





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