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Over everything we knew, there was something else to know-and that was always
something we want, and maybe even take the time to learn it for ourself.
Jupiter is and was a planet-an immobile part of a large mobile-connected by
some design of space fabric, or perhaps this fabric simply holds everything
together-and comets that weave in and out of this vast darkness, are weaving
the broken strands back together.
When rain falls from the sky, and sinks into the earth beneath our feet-
a reaction is developed, and then performed-and I define this as a cosmic
functionary tool-a rule for measuring distance from the rest of the cascade.
The cascade is a grand curtain that envelopes all living particles, and within
this cascade are temporary arrangements for "things" and what these things
must do to perform lively.
Jupiter has a cascade-it is named something in alien, and I can't decipher the
planets atmospheric code-star gazers and artists' renderings have captured
the essence of ancient alien codex, but I am not sure if they know what the
writings foretell-or perhaps, they are instructions for the comet weavers.
Our cascade on Earth is called-the ozone layer-I am sure it has another name
to the grand designer-but it is sufficient enough for humans to understand
a simple word, right?
Jupiter is over one thousand times the size of Earth-and that does not include
its cosmic dimensions-or orbital reach-I think if the universe is expanding,
why shouldn't we?



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