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fly me up to see the stars teach me how they manage to sparkle in the dark bring me down onto the ground tell me why these people carry no joy under this sunlight i'm walking on the sidewalks watching her cry all alone by her bed helping him search for the courage he will never find somebody told me we will come through
the liars and their lies.

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The following comments are for "The Liars And Their Lies"
by ^white

i agree with penelope
this could be a really good poem or atleast a poem that is easier to read if you put more of a format to it...a bit of organization.

jimmy g.

( Posted by: JimmyAndHisRocket [Member] On: January 17, 2005 )

i meant it to be that way.. :)

( Posted by: ^white [Member] On: January 18, 2005 )

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