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"Sorry I Forgot Your BIRTHDAY"
I'm sorry I forgot your BIRTHDAY.
Even though it is a little late.
I just want you to know I thought about you on that day anyway.
Even though I didn't say HAPPY BIRTHDAY on your special day.
I know I told you I would remember.
But things came up and I thought it was in September.
That's why I didn't remember.
But next time I promise to remember that your BIRTHDAY is definitely not in September.

------
Ciara


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The following comments are for ""Sorry I Forgot You BIRTHDAY""
by Hoobie555

wait, i think i get it... i think...
are you trying to rhyme 'remember' and 'September'? if so you might want to change the line breaks to reflect that. What's with capitalizing entire words? i'm not sure what it is You're trying to say with that... hmmm.

( Posted by: nimue_the_mighty [Member] On: January 19, 2005 )





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