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From the first day we met
and to this day in time
you have constantly been a ray
of sunshine that brightens my day.

To watch you smile inspires my soul
I feel your essence wrap itself
softly around my heart to
embrace me with your warmth.

You have become more beautiful
with each passing sunrise
surely it has been your love
that has guided us along the way.

With you it has made no difference
where I am nor what I do
the one thing that will always remain
is how you love me day after day.

You have shown and given me
something essentially very hard to find
which has been your unconditional love
and all the wonders you can be.

len daniels

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