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I wasn't raised knowing anything, but rather grew up in an environement that
was safe and insecure-insecure in the ways of normal people, insecure in never
being quite sure about the day and the events that would unfold for them. I can
say many things to this effect that would hold no relevance or real meaning to
them, unless a change could occur, and a benefit would be made. The world was a
piece of selfishness raised to a high rung on the ladder, dangling off the end
of a safety rope-tethered like a childrens toy ball-just out of reach because of
their temperament and habitual ways that leave most of them hanging themselves
after the first attempts-I call this "madness"-because it makes me seperate
everything that much easier-I can see the whole picture in my mind, but it is
often difficult to paint-the abstract design is full of so many elements that aren't easily configured or easily understood-the complexity of this is opposite
of any steps a "normal" person would take to reach the rope, grab the ball firm
and think about-"where is the child who earned the right to be here to play in
the first place?"-then we unlearn everything from this point downward-a spiral
of tears and joys can often manifest into a wonderful life-or perhaps, for me,
a moment of peace when I die. Don't waste the time on your hands, and wash the
blood of the lamb with all your fears-fear is only a priority in your life, when
you leave the children behind-reaching for something to learn?-or perhaps...

D.E.M.-04-To Be Cont.


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