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You pushed me today… you pushed me too far.
I feel the rage running down my arms.
My fingers turn into fits as the fire starts.
As you yell at me the fire spreads.
If you keep this up your going to be dead.
You push me again this time to the floor.
I feel the anger taking control.
I can feel the fire spreading to my eyes.
I start to get up you just push me back down.
Then you start feeling your self falling to the ground.
As I swing with my left then swing with my right.
You will never forget the day you picked this fight…..and pushed me too far.




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The following comments are for "To far"
by poetfreak

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Joey ur r such a great person @ writing poems and ur a great friend hope were friends for ever and maybe more hint hint


Courtney

( Posted by: urlover88 [Member] On: January 29, 2005 )

Ok....?
If you have any input on my writing please let me know.

PoetFreak

( Posted by: poetfreak [Member] On: April 1, 2005 )





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