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your light shines on me no longer
but somehow i grow anyways
my body is purged of it's hunger
for you the rest of my days
the sea of thoughts the well of hope
surronding you runs dry
finally i've learned to cope
and i no longer cry
now my world's sun is set
and the darkness should be colder
now the stars have cast thier net
and i'm without your shoulder
i am mired in the night
byt my prison causes me no pain
I have no urge to fight
or begin my trouble once again
so i guess you're gone now
perhaps i should be sadder
but i live without you somehow
though i guess it doesn't matter.

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