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You ran away but you left something behind
I know it`s in there somewhere
that little peice is very hard to find
Sometimes it can be a burden to bear

People say it`s in my face
some say it`s in my heart
I know it`s in the same place
they just don`t know where to start

Some might think it`s in the way I love
I know right where it is
is it in my hug
or is it in my kiss

These things are very complicated
Some think that once it leaves it`s gone forever
it makes me a little aggitated

Yes it may be true
but I need some part of you

A.R


------
Andrew Rasmussen


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