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I long to taste the world with a kiss
I tasted the lips of love
Truth sings without mercy
Honey, you make tablesugar taste bitter

He is beautiful as the moon
tossing in a white linen ocean
I find no words to say
A conversation of silence
But when I heard his voice
lightning lashed and cracked

Behind the velvet curtains
They said I was crazy

The scent of the hair of the one you love
He`ll make you shine brighter in heaven.


Andrew Rasmussen

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