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I sit alone on this rainy summer day
Dreaming about the pleasures of the warm sun
swimming in the ocean blue
With nothing to do I sit here
The power is out
Everything is black
The thunder is booming lighting flashing
So I take a nap and Dream about what i will do tomarro


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