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Nevermore will I be hurt deeply
by you
Nevermore will I think
of you
Nevermore will my happiness be suppressed
by you
Nevermore will I be tormented
by you
For I hear the wispers in your head
I see the lies on your lips
Was it the drugs in you or was
it your lips?

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**FORSAKEN_6URL**


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by forsakengurl

Nevermore
I hope you mean it. You have to love yourself before anyone else can. Keep up the writing. It's helps the strengthen the soul.

( Posted by: DonnaJ [Member] On: January 11, 2005 )





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