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Fragile, surprised by the cold
My trees are still and transparent
And sun – a mother-pearl soul –
Looks through the net of crowns
Foreseeing the leaves and virgins
In flowing vintage gowns
All titivating…


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Sua sponte,
O.


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The following comments are for "- pearls and shadows -"
by City

I humbly bow my respect
thank you ladies
your respond means a lot to me
~ makes me shy and at the same time makes me want to write more..
as .. I still need to learn more of the language and its ... everyhting

thank you again

( Posted by: City [Member] On: January 14, 2005 )

City: smartened....
Seems as if you are doing quite well with the language..Enjoyed the read. Keep writing.

BobbyG

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: January 14, 2005 )

Excellent City,
Well I am awestruck. Is English your second language to Russian?
Also City I feel that I should apologize for not noticing you sooner. I know it is not necessary, but I have missed out!!!

Be shy if you must, but NEVER stop writing. You have a gift. Nice of you to share it with us.

Megwetch,
Darlene

( Posted by: Dareva [Member] On: April 28, 2005 )

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there are days when I cannot help but writing, and the language doesn't really matter
but there are other days as well...
I value the respond I get here, and so I try to publish my writing when I can

thank you for the encouragement :) I also appreciate the critique

( Posted by: City [Member] On: April 28, 2005 )





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