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state park winter freeze
car donuts on iced-up lake
hypothermia

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Kacee Huggs


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The following comments are for "OOPS!"
by Nitz Kitty

NKitty's: State Park Plunge...
Gotta use the High School parking lot for ice-donuts...What a memory Hoot!...


B.

( Posted by: bobby7L [Member] On: January 11, 2005 )

oops
Thanks for the ratings, Bob and Chris...this really did happen...Lady was depressed and off her meds...so she took a ride...don't know if it was an accident or if she wanted to commit suicide...but once she hit the ice ...she just kept spinning and then ...the ice collapsed...they didn't find her for days...too bad...Kacee

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: January 11, 2005 )

NitzKitty:"Oops" indeed...
Lets hope last ride brought peace. My fond memories aside, this is a tragic story...Either way.

BobbyG

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: January 11, 2005 )

OOPS...
Kacee, this is sweet. "I" think this is one of your best... Robin

( Posted by: Robinbird [Member] On: January 16, 2005 )

Opps/Robin
Thanks so much for you nice comment and generous rating...this is a sad but true story...it happened at Christmas time..

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: January 17, 2005 )





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