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Splattered quandaries perplexed over my perceived movements of bliss
And the saltation frenzies of…JUNK!
Over the nonchalant omnipotence of stuffff
Shards of eccentric naivety and…things.
Fragments of flinching intelligence and…stuff.
Lackadaisical pointing and things…or should I say “stuff” this time?
A flibbertigibbet’s knowledge!
This was pointless. I think I’ll be taking off now.

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The following comments are for "Sloping Writer’s Block (In “stuff” version!)"
by Kaythan

Kaythan's perplexing "stuff."..
I like your "flinching intelligence"....Keep writing "stuff".......


( Posted by: bobby7L [Member] On: January 11, 2005 )

Kaythan's sign off...
I love the final line. That's just my take on it. I'm no critic, but I felt the whole piece...Keep writing...

Robert William

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: January 11, 2005 )

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