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You hide behind the reasons why
Of which, most are vague
And all are excuses.

I am tired of my
Search for a companion
When this is how it ends.

Impossible situations come to me
Like pennies
While I wish for quarters.

And they used to slash deeper ravines
In my restless heart,
Where now it's more annoying
Than painful to admit them
To the pages of my life.

Shortcomings and emotional disability...
Heavy baggage that cannot be lost
Or ever overcome.

She always has many faces,
And you have never really known her,
And she's always bigger than
The truth she obliterates.



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