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Romantic, fragile and light,
transparent like a morning snow
transforming in a magic glow
old memories of distant site -
my dreams

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Sua sponte,
O.


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The following comments are for "- winter dreams -"
by City

choises that we make
dear windchime,
you go the message and it is very important for me.. yes, I beleive that memories are constantly transformed by our dreams, our illusions... colors that we choose

wishing you to find your perfect place in the new year

( Posted by: City [Member] On: January 10, 2005 )

City: Out of a dream..but not quite awake
....Really like this. You use the language well..
Look forward to more..

BobbyG

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: January 14, 2005 )

City,
I noticed your name on a comment on the first page today and decided to follow you to your biography and hoped to find some writing and I am pleased that I did.
I am a lover of dreams. Amazed of our subconcious selves that live during our physical sleep.
Whispy fragmented thoughts that run deep. We are lucky, the ones that can remember them.
I truly like this and do look for more as Lucy had said. I have to go read more of your submissions now..I am intrigued.

Be the best you can be,
Darlene

( Posted by: Dareva [Member] On: April 28, 2005 )

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thank you, Darlene
Dreams are more than most of us think .. it is our path to place we are meant to discover
at least I think so some times :)

( Posted by: City [Member] On: April 28, 2005 )





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