Restless Dreamer
by nae411 (Moderator) - published: January 7, 2005
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Category - Poetry
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I am the restless dreamer,
thinking always of you,
dreams take me on a flight of color,
where darkness makes fantasies come true.

I am the restless dreamer,
nights spent summoning you to me,
your energy inspires lucid thoughts,
only our connection will set me free

I am the restless dreamer,
foggy eyed with erotic intent,
undressed and available,
wanting this night to be well spent.

Bring these restless nights to a halt,
find pleasure in my need,
take me at once with passion,
plant the ever forbidden seed.

Rescue me forever lover,
intoxicate me in loves delight,
offer visions of tranquil repose,
from the ecstasy of this night.

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I am on a journey. Looking for Me. Everyday I get a little closer. The more time goes by the more I realize I'm always changing. This journey could take forever... Renae L. Soler

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The following comments are for "Restless Dreamer"
by nae411

Nae
I thought you weren't going to share this one *sniff sniff* hehe.

So what part of your spiritual journey is this road, the tantric one? :-P

I think I am going to have to re-evaluate my ideas on Claire being the horn-dog of this site. Your husband is one lucky guy.

Alex :-)

( Posted by: londongrey [Member] On: January 7, 2005 )

unchanging love
Nae, I loved this yesterday, I love it today, and I will love it tomorrow. I deem you the queen of sensual. My own efforts pale against yours, and have intimidated me into silence...LOL...at least on that subject.

A beautiful poem.

Claire

( Posted by: clairesbest [Member] On: January 7, 2005 )

Beautiful write
Nae,

Beautifully written and well crafted. Great sensual work! "A flight of color" was a great line! Wonderful job!!

( Posted by: EverybodyElsesGirl [Member] On: January 7, 2005 )

Girl
Where do you keep all this stuff inside you. I never know exactly what I'm going to get anymore when I click on your name. I like this one, it's so you and Laz is not only lucky but I think part of the muse in this piece. :) I'm lucky to count you as friend, now tell me how in the world you can write such sensual pieces without stepping over the line? ;) Glad to see you posting again.

~Jessica

( Posted by: Jessicanm [Member] On: January 7, 2005 )

Alex,Claire, EEG, Jess
Alex, sorry I had to share... LOL, and how did you know my secret? Did I let that slip too?

Claire, girl nothing about you is pale, and you intimidated? Come on, who you kidding, LMAO.

EEG, Thank you, thank you, thank you. I am so happy you enjoyed.

Jess, I don't step on the line here, ahem... I trample all over it elsewhere, lol. Thank you, I am glad you liked it.

Nae

( Posted by: nae411 [Moderator] On: January 7, 2005 )

nae's dreamer
Oh, Renae! Another beauty from you! This is as sensual as it is sensitive. It appeals to all my sensibilities...Very much.
BTW, I much prefer reading about your "ecstasy" than the chemical kind (at least I can relate to this, LOL).
Your fantasies are the absolute best!
Oh, and how the restlessness gets "solved", with the rescue: such apt closure!
Thank you for this.
Lucie

( Posted by: windchime [Member] On: January 7, 2005 )

Nae
These types of your writing are what's making you a featured writer! You are a celebrated romantic-sensual poet, RESTLESS in your own passion for writing in this genre.

( Posted by: PETERPAULINO [Member] On: January 7, 2005 )

Lucie,Peter, Grey
Lucie, thank you. You as always warm my heart, you are better than a cup of mint tea (which happens to be my favorite so this is quite a compliment). Thank you.

Peter, thank you so much. I guess I am a little restless, lol. So my friend when are we going to finish our collab????

Grey, I am always hot, I mean, forget it, it's us, lol. Thank you.

Nae

( Posted by: nae411 [Moderator] On: January 8, 2005 )

restless Nae...
The rythm on this was excellent and the pace quickened at right moments. Your word choices too were spot on and this felt so complete. Great writing Nae with huge infusions of your special warmth carrying it beutifully. Namaste

( Posted by: tinalouise [Member] On: January 8, 2005 )

Restless Nae.......
Nae, I so look farward to reading your work. You never let me down either. Another beautifully sensual poem. Thank you for sharing.

( Posted by: Snapshot [Member] On: January 8, 2005 )

Tina and Snapshot
Tina, thank you so much. I always appreciate your words.
Namaste.

Snapshot, Thank you, I feel honored. I hope I never disappoint you.

Nae

( Posted by: nae411 [Moderator] On: January 9, 2005 )

On the edge of dreams
Can I get a glass of cool water? It a little warm in here.

I like the dreamy setting to these very real feelings. I think its helps what could have been a sexy poem, become the sensual poem that others have spoken about.

You've played it right on the line there and right toward the end, the line between dreams and reality gets real blurry and I'm left wondering.

[another glass of water over here, please.]

-Philo

( Posted by: Philo [Member] On: January 26, 2005 )

Philo/Restless Dreamer
Philo, I am sorry, I don't know how I missed your comment. Glad I wasn't the one bringing the water you would have been dehydrated by now. I am glad you enjoyed.

Nae

( Posted by: nae411 [Moderator] On: April 19, 2005 )

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