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A poem unwritten
Is like an unborn child
Asleep in some subconscious abyss
Never to lament in sorrow
Nor laugh with joy
Never to reach out
And touch others
Never to reach up
And touch the stars

Tom Foley

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You are a unique and creative person... sing your song; recite your poetry or read us your story.
We are waiting for your words...


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by TomA

Tom: Pure poems...
I have this thing I've called "Pure Poetry"...I don't put them to paper or speak them. I may have to rethink, after reading this piece and comments
Once again inspired by L.O...Thanks Tom.


Robert William

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: January 6, 2005 )

So This Is How Poetry Pops
I think about the poetry
yet to be written...
next thing I know...I'm writing

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: July 8, 2016 )





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