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I've a scattered mind and it's hard to focus.
Have my To-Do list yet not much gets crossed off.
I somehow manage to add things to it though.
Always finding something new to occupy myself.
Staring at the Christmas tree, still decorated.
Pine needles strew about on the floor.
I can hear the trash men coming down the street.
But alas this tree will have to wait till next week.
I am not used to being on my own.
I realize it will take me some time to find a routine.
Yet everyday I try to accomplish something.
There is no need to fret when something isn’t done.
Eventually I’ll get there, no need to hasten.
There is just me and I’m my own boss.
I do like this being on my own and free.
Coming and going as I please.
To choose what I want to eat…
...maybe a big bowl of Frosted Flakes even.
The vacuum is calling my name and I ignore it.
Once the house is de-Christmatized I’ll put it to work
Until then pine needles still accumulate on the floor…
...and under the wreath at my front door.
Today it is gently snowing outside my window.
I am content to sit here at my keyboard and watch…
…as snowflakes lazily, slowly, softly fall to earth.
My passion is writing and when the inspiration comes...
…I must create and everything else must wait.
After all my “To-Do” list will still be there when I’m ready.
And even though I’m scattered, I’m moving slow but steady.




------
CJ Herlihy


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The following comments are for "Free To Be Scattered If I Please"
by cjherlihy

Carol free to be...
Number one on the priority list of things to do is writing. The Christmas tree can shed some more. The vacuum cleaner can take some days off. Did I mention that writing is number one? Oh, and that sense of accomplishment you get from accomplishing things, isn't it better when you accomplish some writing? It is for me..
Write on!
Lucie

( Posted by: windchime [Member] On: January 6, 2005 )

Carol's list
CJ, this is a first class poem, and expresses what many of us feel when writing is the consuming thing that other things have to wait.

I had lost that recently, but believe I am finding it again, and your poem just highlighted the issue.

(fix strew to strewn)...sorry, I notice stuff like that. A lovely piece which I have taken to heart. Lucie is right, what better sense of accomplishment that to complete a piece that has been rattling in your head or heart.

As ever,
Claire

( Posted by: Clairesbest [Member] On: January 6, 2005 )

Free CJ...
A beautiful piece of writing Carol. I am so enjoying your life at the moment....I hope that doesn't sound stalker/voyeur/wierd!! Reading your changes is strangely pleasurable and your delivery grows with each new submission. This one has a unique rythm and rhyme that felt conversational and almost 'matter-of-fact'. Can't wait for the next. Namaste
p.s.
I find rearranging my home a good beginning to whatever is next....it gives you a different vantage point and perspective :)

( Posted by: tinalouise [Member] On: January 6, 2005 )

To do Lists
...are over rated!!!! I have them two and all I seem to do is collect them...lol. Seems to be a running theme in your work as well as the theme that you're living single once again. It's a big change going from having someone, anyone in the same house and then having them gone. But you're right and good forfinding the good in being alone again. There is a big difference between being lonely and being alone.

This is a good piece, the last line sums it all up wonderfully.

~Jessica

( Posted by: Jessicanm [Member] On: December 9, 2005 )

CJ's freedom
Haven't a clue what you are talking about, lol. I haven't been free since... since... oh a very long time. I truly enjoyed this read and what it represents. Nice to find you again girl.

Nae ;0)

( Posted by: nae411 [Moderator] On: December 10, 2005 )





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