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While on this journey
Seeing something in a dream
Just gave you wisdom

"If we will seek the counsel of the One who keeps us, and not of our own understanding; Then we would accomplish much, much more" - ~Jeannie Simpson~

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The following comments are for "Penetration"

I'm not sure this is really a Haiku - I just don't care though Jeannie. It's so lovely you can call it what ever you want. I just love the idea of a dream giving us insight for the journey we are all on. Good one. huni.

( Posted by: Huni [Member] On: January 8, 2005 )

Huni & WindChime;
For your warm comments...Windchime, You hit it right on the nose...thanks for the understanding of the words...

Blessings to both of you,

( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: January 10, 2005 )

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