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Jeans and Foxholes
by TamiJane (Member) - published: January 7, 2005
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Category - Poetry
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You're a stranger
Wearing jeans that belong
To a friend of mine.

Actually,
We were more than
Friends...

But it doesn't matter,
I'll look beyond
The jeans,

For the sacred duty
Of the friend
Who wore them out,

Hiding in obvious
Foxholes, from the ties
Of more than friendship.


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The following comments are for "Jeans and Foxholes"
by TamiJane

Jeans/Tami
I'm smiling with pleasure and wishing to know more of this 'story'. Like it very much. huni.

( Posted by: huni [Member] On: January 7, 2005 )

Story/Huni
This was inspired by one of those elusive creatures who try to get away because they don't want to get too involved, but then he found he couldn't stay away...

( Posted by: TamiJane [Member] On: January 8, 2005 )





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