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A dream was to live
And a life was to dream.
Fantasy now an urban legend,
Upon the ghetto streets

Journeys leading to nothing
Sobbing avenues and roads
Down to the strong-willed gangsters
And our pitch black fortune

New bitten technology
Picking at our lives
Opposing nature’s ways
Only to give companies their bidding;

So, grip onto what you’ve got
Before what is human
Ceases into clanging torment
And shivers in the dust.



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