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Swift leaps of bursting particles
Plunge and soar straight into
Into radiating spirals of
Sweet, arousing determinations
Of declared, amusing
Twisted, insolent piles
Of sensuous, indignant
Parcels of true admiration
Despite a possible false
Subjective judgment,
Immense love has still occurred
Tremendous, pacing shreds
Of dark, colliding
Intense worlds have sharpened
Constricting murmurs
Of scattered, misty words
Lavish into gigantic pools
Of awakening imagination
Carefully possess your mind
…Then only in the end…
It tears you apart.



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The following comments are for "Torn Collocation"
by Kaythan

Kaythan:Elements unconjoined..
Great title...helps to lure the reader in...Imaginative writing...


RW

( Posted by: bobby7L [Member] On: January 7, 2005 )





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