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Heightened architecture
Filled with illuminated life
Lavishing with immoderate emotion
Chipped off of natural flesh and mind
Trigger the shattered aspects of intelligence
Venturing down the chaotic streets
Over wincing concrete
Containing the scrutinized whirl
Of thundering journeys
Glimmering with hints of intimidation
And ticking down to death



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The following comments are for "The Avenue"
by Kaythan

LOL.
Haha, I know I'm sad for rating my own poem...lol...I didn't mean to rate it a ten, sorry. -_- Yeah. Please rate!

( Posted by: Kaythan [Member] On: January 6, 2005 )

Kaythan:Avenue of Life...
Well, I'm giving it a 10. Reminds me of Avenue of the Americas. Very NYC. Very cool.


Robert William

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: January 6, 2005 )





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